This is an incredibly rough draft. I've been playing around with it for a while, and I don't like the actual argument that I'm making (which is not posted on the rough draft). I found a ton of scholarly research that advocates for teen mothers, and I tried incorporating these sources into my paper. I ended up with 4 paragraphs of "preaching" and I absolutely hated the way it turned out. Several hours later I ended up deleting the whole thing. I would have left it in to be workshopped, but despite the feedback I'll receive, I know that I would have deleted it from the final draft anyway. Think of it this way, I saved you guys a lot of pain in not having to read that crap.
So I know that there isn't too much for everyone to read and workshop, but I'm hoping that the in-class workshop will set me on the right track. All comments are welcomed and appreciated!
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